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    Vengence!

    The heart you crushed was mine, and
    i all i saw was red from all the things you
    said not a care from you i got ,my heart it's
    dead to you as i drink away my pain to forget you
    is my call in life because you are bad for me.

    My love for you was real ,all you did was laugh
    when the time came for you to hold me ,all you
    did was stab my back ,so as i sit here halfway
    though my bottle i see nothing but your face.

    My vengence will be complete when i take
    your love with my last sip ,how that will make my day
    you found somone new so soon how you really must
    love this game you play,not caring for my heart you had,
    as you threw it out the window and and smiled.

    My heart is almost stoped as this bottle flows
    through my vains,its nothing new to you as
    another guy just dies of a broken heart , i hope you
    treat this new love better because he is my freind,
    so now i am almost done and i feel the pain slip away.

    So as i forget you and all the pain you gave me
    i will forget the pins and sufering that you love gave to me,
    farewell to your love and hello to my demise ,i fade away
    wit this last bit of poiosn in my mouth ,my vengence now
    complete you will never hurt me again.

    this poem is about how trust and love can be given and then it be turned
    away with a blink of an eye ,wit out even careing its a cold hard fact
    that love is never found unless both give it 100% if it isnt give that full
    attention the love was never really there to beigne with. and it can drive
    the one it hurts to drastic measure's .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Vengence!

    Thats a nice poem Holder. Deep and it has nice wording to it. Love can go both ways, very true. Keep up the good work!

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    Re: Vengence!

    Yet another very good poem from you. You just keep them coming don't you? lol I liked it a lot and it's true. Love does hurt sometimes and drives the person hurt to do things they wouldn't normally do. You capture real life so great, keep it up!
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    Re: Vengence!

    thanks i am lgad you liked it and i see you both got the meaning i am glad
    ad love really can kill if you let it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Vengence!

    I know excatly how that feels like! *sighs and brushes away a tear~ very good
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    Re: Vengence!

    This is probably your best piece ever! I love it, nice use of words and emotions!

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    Re: Vengence!

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    nice full of emotion. like the words. reminds me of somethings

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    Re: Vengence!

    Omg!! That was sooooooo awesome big bro!! *crys* Beautifuly done! I really loved this! And I think you got the point across very well.Love can be such a wondeful thing but it also can be the worse thing you've ever felt.And sometimes it can drive some people 2 do things that they never dreamed that they would do.
    Anyways,Awesome job big bro!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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