Hmmm.... This is interesting. I feel like I've read something like it before. And Im not so sure thats a good thing.
This part, however....
"my mind filled.....
i hate every single moment,
of my outcry,
as i lay here on the floor,
weeping out your name."
That seemed to stand out to me. Maybe because out of everything you wrote... that was what I recognized the most. Reminds me of the low point in breakdown. When you cant keep your mind off of that someone or something that is ripping you apart.
All in all... good poem... not too original... but good none the less.