Victims Of A Vampire
Hmn.. don't know if this is good or not , just thought of sharing it
I HATE THOSE EMPTY WORDS
there was never a thing that was set in the AUTHORITY OF JUSTICE
I hate those who kill in the name of their justice
But as of now
I Seek My Own justice
Feel my rightusness
Suffer, bleed and die
A mere dream
I lost all scence of feelings
Killed infront of my eyes
I lost my feelings along with the death of my final feeling
My Most awaited victim
Your pathetic life , will surely come to an end
IT CONSUMES MY PURE INTENT OF JUSTICE
STILL ECHO IN MIND
MY VICTIM ...
DEATH WILL BECOME YOUR LAST DREAM THIS NIGHT
SCREAM IN AGONY...
MY HAPPINESS IS WHEN I TORTURE YOU
MY JOY IS WHEN I PIERCE MY FANGS INTO YOU
AND MY LOVE IS TAKING YOUR LIFE AWAY
MY DEAREST VICTIM..
AS I NOW TAKE YOUR LIFE AWAY
YOU WERE BUT A VICTIM OF MY VENGEANCE
AND ALL SHALL FALL
VICTIMS TO MY POWER
VICIMS OF A VAMPIRE
Re: Victims Of A Vampire
The little dots after each word? Frightening, I hate it when writers do that. There are other ways of emphazing or stressing a word. How adding more words and doing something different to the word you stress? That would make it much more appealing.