The little dots after each word? Frightening, I hate it when writers do that. There are other ways of emphazing or stressing a word. How adding more words and doing something different to the word you stress? That would make it much more appealing.
Hmn.. don't know if this is good or not , just thought of sharing it
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Justice...
Rightusness...
empty words...
I HATE THOSE EMPTY WORDS
there was never a thing that was set in the AUTHORITY OF JUSTICE
I hate those who kill in the name of their justice
But as of now
I Seek My Own justice
MY VICTIMS...
Feel my rightusness
Suffer, bleed and die
Forgiveness
A mere dream
I lost all scence of feelings
Killed infront of my eyes
I lost my feelings along with the death of my final feeling
Now,
My Most awaited victim
Your pathetic life , will surely come to an end
VENGEANCE
VENGEANCE
IT CONSUMES MY PURE INTENT OF JUSTICE
KILL
KILL
KILL HIM...
THOSE WORDS...
STILL ECHO IN MIND
HEH..
MY VICTIM ...
MY HUNT...
DEATH WILL BECOME YOUR LAST DREAM THIS NIGHT
SCREAM
SCREAM IN AGONY...
SUFFER...
SUFFER...
SUFFER MORE...
MY HAPPINESS IS WHEN I TORTURE YOU
MY JOY IS WHEN I PIERCE MY FANGS INTO YOU
AND MY LOVE IS TAKING YOUR LIFE AWAY
YOU ...
MY DEAREST VICTIM..
DIE...
AS I NOW TAKE YOUR LIFE AWAY
PAINFULLY DIE...
YOU WERE BUT A VICTIM OF MY VENGEANCE
AND ALL SHALL FALL
VICTIMS TO MY POWER
VICIMS OF A VAMPIRE
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
The little dots after each word? Frightening, I hate it when writers do that. There are other ways of emphazing or stressing a word. How adding more words and doing something different to the word you stress? That would make it much more appealing.
Seduced by Flesh
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