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    Victims Of A Vampire

    Hmn.. don't know if this is good or not , just thought of sharing it
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    Justice...
    Rightusness...
    empty words...
    I HATE THOSE EMPTY WORDS
    there was never a thing that was set in the AUTHORITY OF JUSTICE
    I hate those who kill in the name of their justice
    But as of now
    I Seek My Own justice
    MY VICTIMS...
    Feel my rightusness
    Suffer, bleed and die
    Forgiveness
    A mere dream
    I lost all scence of feelings
    Killed infront of my eyes
    I lost my feelings along with the death of my final feeling
    Now,
    My Most awaited victim
    Your pathetic life , will surely come to an end
    VENGEANCE
    VENGEANCE
    IT CONSUMES MY PURE INTENT OF JUSTICE
    KILL
    KILL
    KILL HIM...
    THOSE WORDS...
    STILL ECHO IN MIND
    HEH..
    MY VICTIM ...
    MY HUNT...
    DEATH WILL BECOME YOUR LAST DREAM THIS NIGHT
    SCREAM
    SCREAM IN AGONY...
    SUFFER...
    SUFFER...
    SUFFER MORE...
    MY HAPPINESS IS WHEN I TORTURE YOU
    MY JOY IS WHEN I PIERCE MY FANGS INTO YOU
    AND MY LOVE IS TAKING YOUR LIFE AWAY
    YOU ...
    MY DEAREST VICTIM..
    DIE...
    AS I NOW TAKE YOUR LIFE AWAY
    PAINFULLY DIE...
    YOU WERE BUT A VICTIM OF MY VENGEANCE
    AND ALL SHALL FALL
    VICTIMS TO MY POWER
    VICIMS OF A VAMPIRE
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: Victims Of A Vampire

    The little dots after each word? Frightening, I hate it when writers do that. There are other ways of emphazing or stressing a word. How adding more words and doing something different to the word you stress? That would make it much more appealing.
    Seduced by Flesh


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