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    A Voice Hidden

    Didn’t I have a voice?
    I deserved to be heard too
    That’s the problem
    You never listened
    Now I’m sitting here hating the world
    I won’t talk now
    When I wanted to, you didn’t let me
    It’s funny now
    The times I was hurt to be quiet
    Now it saddens you that I won’t speak at all
    You’ve created this
    It’s not my fault
    All of a sudden you care and want to give me attention
    What? You just realized you had a child?
    You claim you know how its feels but you don’t
    Have you ever went through the same torture as me?
    The countless lies spread against you
    No one believing anything you say,
    All because someone wanted to hide the truth and make you miserable
    Yea, that’s me
    The liar,
    The problem child,
    A rebel without a cause
    To think people actually believed those things about me
    If they only knew
    What I had to go through to get away
    I always wanted people to know me as a person
    What would they say?
    Would I be treated any different?
    Maybe they could if only I would speak

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    so much hate and abusing in such a poem, i give it a 10 out of 10, keep it up girl you doing good

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    Awesome peom, such hatred towards the crappy world is freaking kool. Nice peom, keep it up.

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    boo woo
    i mean it a good poem but dam all i hear is a little kid crying for mommy or dady to lison to them.
    i dont me to jugde but life isint ever a peace of cake.
    u cry becose no one hears u well if u whant to be heard u better have some thing better to say then u dont lisin.

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    Hatred...Despair...is that the purpose of this poem? It seems like it,yet there seems to be another way to look at this poem.I am not quite sure,but it might be that you are longing to feel special, or maybe...accepted?I might be wrong though.

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    this poem was about my times of abuse before i moved out of my dad's house. i was beaten regularly and no one believed me when i told. i was sent to counslers and physiatrist because my dad spread rumors and lies that i was crazy. it wasn't that i didnt get attention. i got the wrong kind. anywayz i'm glad ya'll liked it

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    Re: A Voice Hidden

    I like this poem to tell you the truth that's what I went through. Even through it all I found happiness that was worth it all. I would go through it again to be where I am today. I know what not to do to my children when I have some because I would never put them through what I have gone through and what your poem has stated. Seriously keep up the good work and like before send me a private message when your next one comes out.
    ™Mommy To Micah And Shawn!™


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