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    The day of enchantment that prosper the joy of kindness with nurture ness.
    A perfect life of in memorable dreams, that revolves in my nightmares through the veins of my head.

    No selfishness of any kind arose in this forsaken land of variation wonder.
    Respect comes to purity from the heart of the center down inside the earth’s core.

    Relations reveal indifferently from each other’s emotion.
    Sadness falls on my shoulder to crumple up my life.

    The extreme pressure of letting life slip away with every heart beat.
    Cherishing is not my value, only memories from my mind I wield.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    pretty nice, if not alittle random to me, but still good nontheless.
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    That is a good support, though i had no clue that there were parts of random things. I have just had time into putting good feelings along with the rythm that makes it feel as if you were there. I really need some good ideas around the post i start; with long defining poems that way i can create the way i can possibly turn out into a point that people has never heard before.

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    WoW dark that pretty good its so meaningful but true alittle random but still good
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    Quote Originally Posted by cojoe5 View Post
    WoW dark that pretty good its so meaningful but true alittle random but still good
    Well at least i did the best not to turn it random when i completed it, and also it is quite meaningful that is something good i should hear when i am making poems out of inspiration although it is not for me it is for all the member to read them in the joyous time. I would admit that the poems do not intefere with my social life but with the dignity i try to make out from.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    Well at least i did the best not to turn it random when i completed it, and also it is quite meaningful that is something good i should hear when i am making poems out of inspiration although it is not for me it is for all the member to read them in the joyous time. I would admit that the poems do not intefere with my social life but with the dignity i try to make out from.
    *sniffle* wow now that was just beautful
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    That is very appreciative of you cojoe5, i really do not want to be all that perfect in being a true poet because i am still writing more and i cannot just end there when there is a more complete theme overall. My thoughts are only this; having a best poem would mean that your having to have full complete control over the world, but in my choice of words i speak is that the poems i have worked out and typed up are sincerely to talk about different set of things you know. But your words do touch me a bit and i am very glad that you said that i hope i get to make more thoughtful poems in later times.

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    Quote Originally Posted by demonicloud View Post
    pretty nice, if not alittle random to me, but still good nontheless.
    Dark1Angel ! i disagree with this one it's the randomness and and the spontaneity of the poem is what makes it good.
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