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    Well PhoenixSara, you are correct to what your saying only i am not entirely sure of what is recommendable for me to what i should plot for my next set of poem that i will post up during this week and also there are other endless possibility of making new combintations of what makes a poem indeed good.
    Only for me, for example I have not been practicing to keep on writing more poems only i get poems by walking around town, listening to music, and also roaming around nature on my own to find out the real meaning of my poetry.

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    Why not put a little bit more of what you experience i mean the poem is beautiful enough but when you put a little bit more of you it does wonders specially if it's done through speed writing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PhoenixSara View Post
    Why not put a little bit more of what you experience i mean the poem is beautiful enough but when you put a little bit more of you it does wonders specially if it's done through speed writing.
    Hmmm... that may be just it only when it comes with all the experience and also the vision that is being taken. i will be sure that i do take my time and the effort that i do when i am making well written poems, and also i wanted to clear something out when i complete some of the poems i do not go through the speed of it because i type it ahead of time in the word document, so yeah i will follow to what you say.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    Hmmm... that may be just it only when it comes with all the experience and also the vision that is being taken. i will be sure that i do take my time and the effort that i do when i am making well written poems, and also i wanted to clear something out when i complete some of the poems i do not go through the speed of it because i type it ahead of time in the word document, so yeah i will follow to what you say.
    Hehe look frorward to seeing more poems from you and yeah i liked this one too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AngelMage View Post
    Hehe look frorward to seeing more poems from you and yeah i liked this one too.
    Well that is very thoughtful of you and i will post up all the new recent poems i have wrote and this will be the first to be seen by all the members that are interested into reading the kind of poetry i write if possible.

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    Your poem is really good, and I still stand by the randomness, yet you can improve. I feel that you will become a great poet, as long as you try, you'll eventually make potm
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    Both trying and supporting is what makes a poet not simply by the usefulness of knowledge if i am not mistaken. Caring is sharing but i enjoy to share my stories and experiences with all of you because you are consider my family members.

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    Nice to know, improve on the criticisms of people, no matter how harsh, and you can become the best there is, you just need to work at it and become better..."brother"...
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