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    Waiting

    Everyday I watch
    Waiting for you to notice,
    Notice me and the feelings I have

    We aren't friends
    And we dont speak
    But still I wait

    hmmm......

    I watch as the days pass
    I'm tired off waiting
    Waiting for you to look my way,
    For me to gather enough courage to say hi

    Yea its a shame
    Waitin so long to say something so quick
    Can you blame me?
    If you knew the way I felt you wouldn't

    I'm pathetic
    Coveting over a person I barely know
    Wanting to get to know you
    Hoping you'll accept me

    Time is fading quickly
    Will things ever change?
    I dont know
    But if you need me
    I'll still be waiting

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    Re: Waiting

    wow this poem really show how much shyness can affect someone
    so much that if they like the person that person will never know
    and find someone else ,its things like this that make love ,friendships,
    and even just talking important . say what you will but love can
    be so awkward for some people and this poem is just one more way
    that love can affect someone in a bad way. very awesome i liked it a lot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Waiting

    I liked it. You definitely captured it, that's for sure. I remember days like that but thank God I pushed those away. Good luck to you on that. In the meantime, you're getting nice poetry from it.
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    I like the poem. Its cool. Is this the one I read at school. Anyways its still cool! Keep it up!
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    Re: Waiting

    yea its that one. anyways i'm glad you all liked it

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    Wow that was a heartfelt poem gurl, so mudh much sadness, keep up the work.


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