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    EMO WARNING! EMO WARNING! EMO WARNING!
    Now that that's been said, enjoy... critique... don't steal.


    Peel the flesh from off my bones
    Ignore my painful cries and moans
    Drag the knife blade down my wrist
    What a life to take this twist…

    And the blood fell to the floor
    And inside I wanted more
    For my blood to smear the walls
    As my lifeless body falls

    So now I sit - I sit and wait
    For death to be my lasting fate
    Open wounds again, and then
    I let my life come to it's end

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    Re: Waiting

    Ok, since you made such a deal about this being "emo" I have to ask... what does that mean?
    I hear it so much, but its not I term I grew up with...

    Does emo mean you cut yourself, or that you're suicidal... alot of times when people use the term "emo" in reference to poetry, the poetry seems to have a cutting or suicide theme...

    But then Ive heard certain bands are "emo"... but when I hear their music, to me it doesn't seem overly depressing or suicidal ... or about cutting ones self.. so... What DOES emo mean? Emotional??? If so, isn't everything emo to a degree?
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    Nice poem. I wouldn't say it was emo though more like twisted..in a very good way....^__^b

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    Re: Waiting

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Ok, since you made such a deal about this being "emo" I have to ask... what does that mean?
    I hear it so much, but its not I term I grew up with...

    Does emo mean you cut yourself, or that you're suicidal... alot of times when people use the term "emo" in reference to poetry, the poetry seems to have a cutting or suicide theme...

    But then Ive heard certain bands are "emo"... but when I hear their music, to me it doesn't seem overly depressing or suicidal ... or about cutting ones self.. so... What DOES emo mean? Emotional??? If so, isn't everything emo to a degree?
    Emo is just one of those stereotypes of people who are depressed, and generally it involves them being suicidal and cutting themselves.

    Quote Originally Posted by Descended From Darkness View Post
    Nice poem. I wouldn't say it was emo though more like twisted..in a very good way....^__^b
    Thank you. ^.^

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