waiting

sitting here waiting
just waiting
for you
don't know how
dont know when
but someday you'll come
and the waiting'll be done
so I'm waiting
for now
Always waiting
for you

ehhh don't know just threw this together

Well yeah it's obvious you're waiting for your special somebody but it's not half bad ^_^; lil more work...

hmm.....it's ok
it's not great
it's not bad,
it's just ok so nice job and all that

lol well thats better than I expected for something that took me a whole min to put together XD lol thanks guys

i didn't like the beginning and the end part..
did you rush your poem? hmm, nice try though..

Oh my heart!
It bleeds!!
You're words, so dear
Wound me!
Dissapointment and regret
These words, you'd never see
If only time could be turned back
In shameful silence I leave ..

haha!! this also took a min ...

LOL. tHAT WAS A GOOD POEM i LIKE THE SECOND ONE ALSO. yOU CAN REALLY PUT A poem together and injust a minute. I takes me days to think of what to write abourt and about 30 min to write. it. Well i like it. Hope to see more.

Ahh thank you P.R. Princess you're good for my self-esteem
I've been taking quite a few blows here >.<
heh glad you liked them both
I was hoping to make someone laugh with that second one