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    waiting

    sitting here waiting
    just waiting
    for you
    don't know how
    dont know when
    but someday you'll come
    and the waiting'll be done
    so I'm waiting
    for now
    Always waiting
    for you

    ehhh don't know just threw this together

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    Re: waiting

    Well yeah it's obvious you're waiting for your special somebody but it's not half bad ^_^; lil more work...

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    Re: waiting

    hmm.....it's ok
    it's not great
    it's not bad,
    it's just ok so nice job and all that

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    lol well thats better than I expected for something that took me a whole min to put together XD lol thanks guys

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    Re: waiting

    i didn't like the beginning and the end part..
    did you rush your poem? hmm, nice try though..

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    Oh my heart!
    It bleeds!!
    You're words, so dear
    Wound me!
    Dissapointment and regret
    These words, you'd never see
    If only time could be turned back
    In shameful silence I leave ..

    haha!! this also took a min ...

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    LOL. tHAT WAS A GOOD POEM i LIKE THE SECOND ONE ALSO. yOU CAN REALLY PUT A poem together and injust a minute. I takes me days to think of what to write abourt and about 30 min to write. it. Well i like it. Hope to see more.

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    Ahh thank you P.R. Princess you're good for my self-esteem
    I've been taking quite a few blows here >.<
    heh glad you liked them both
    I was hoping to make someone laugh with that second one

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