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    Re: waiting

    At least you took my advice o nthe capitalization. Nice work on teh second poem. I could actually read it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    At least you took my advice o nthe capitalization. Nice work on teh second poem. I could actually read it.
    >.< ah I dont get the point of capitalization
    but if it will make the poem better *somehow*
    it only takes a second so guess I could do it lol
    glad I could get your aproval on something

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    Re: waiting

    Capitalization let's the reader know that you're intlligent and have something to say.

    if i were to write like this would you take me seriously? i hardly doubt it
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    Re: waiting

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Capitalization let's the reader know that you're intlligent and have something to say.

    if i were to write like this would you take me seriously? i hardly doubt it
    that's nice
    when you're writing a paper for a class
    or an article for a magazine
    but,
    I'm sure you'll correct me if I'm wrong,
    isn't the point of these forums to have a place where people can socialize outside of the constraints of everyday life
    for entertainment
    and where we can be relaxed
    preference is what guides us here, right?
    well I prefer to leave the capitalizations for when I'm being serious
    and I don't know if you've noticed
    since we've never really spoken to one another
    that I'm almost never serious
    I leave seriousness for work and school
    but this to me is just play
    and thats how I'll treat it

    also I don't judge others on how they write but what they heve to say
    and if the topic is serious then I'll take them seriously

    but then this is just my opinion
    to each his own

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    Re: waiting

    where's the punctuation?also it is kinda short in my opinion and it doesn't flow that well though i like the idea that is referring probably to someone you care for.

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    @ Jeffery - I was thinking more along the lines of someone I will meet in the future and care for
    but cool glad you liked the topic
    I know I needed to work on it more

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    Re: waiting

    Good poem I hope you get who you've been waiting for.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
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    Re: waiting

    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post
    that's nice
    when you're writing a paper for a class
    or an article for a magazine
    but,
    I'm sure you'll correct me if I'm wrong,
    isn't the point of these forums to have a place where people can socialize outside of the constraints of everyday life
    for entertainment
    and where we can be relaxed
    preference is what guides us here, right?
    well I prefer to leave the capitalizations for when I'm being serious
    and I don't know if you've noticed
    since we've never really spoken to one another
    that I'm almost never serious
    I leave seriousness for work and school
    but this to me is just play
    and thats how I'll treat it

    also I don't judge others on how they write but what they heve to say
    and if the topic is serious then I'll take them seriously

    but then this is just my opinion
    to each his own
    You view using the english language correctly as seriousness and I view it as having intelligence. I cant read something and interpret their meaning if I can barely comprehend it. The rules that we use when writing? Arent just there for "seriousness". They're there for writers to use, and bend to their will.. to make their pieces more than what they seem.

    Forgive me if I only wished for AO to have at least some intelligent writers of their trade.
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