Thread: waiting

Originally Posted by Kasai

At least you took my advice o nthe capitalization. Nice work on teh second poem. I could actually read it.

>.< ah I dont get the point of capitalization
but if it will make the poem better *somehow*
it only takes a second so guess I could do it lol
glad I could get your aproval on something

Capitalization let's the reader know that you're intlligent and have something to say.

if i were to write like this would you take me seriously? i hardly doubt it

Originally Posted by Kasai

Capitalization let's the reader know that you're intlligent and have something to say.

if i were to write like this would you take me seriously? i hardly doubt it

that's nice
when you're writing a paper for a class
or an article for a magazine
but,
I'm sure you'll correct me if I'm wrong,
isn't the point of these forums to have a place where people can socialize outside of the constraints of everyday life
for entertainment
and where we can be relaxed
preference is what guides us here, right?
well I prefer to leave the capitalizations for when I'm being serious
and I don't know if you've noticed
since we've never really spoken to one another
that I'm almost never serious
I leave seriousness for work and school
but this to me is just play
and thats how I'll treat it

also I don't judge others on how they write but what they heve to say
and if the topic is serious then I'll take them seriously

but then this is just my opinion
to each his own

where's the punctuation?also it is kinda short in my opinion and it doesn't flow that well though i like the idea that is referring probably to someone you care for.

@ Jeffery - I was thinking more along the lines of someone I will meet in the future and care for
but cool glad you liked the topic
I know I needed to work on it more

Good poem I hope you get who you've been waiting for.

Originally Posted by KimiFemi

that's nice
when you're writing a paper for a class
or an article for a magazine
but,
I'm sure you'll correct me if I'm wrong,
isn't the point of these forums to have a place where people can socialize outside of the constraints of everyday life
for entertainment
and where we can be relaxed
preference is what guides us here, right?
well I prefer to leave the capitalizations for when I'm being serious
and I don't know if you've noticed
since we've never really spoken to one another
that I'm almost never serious
I leave seriousness for work and school
but this to me is just play
and thats how I'll treat it

also I don't judge others on how they write but what they heve to say
and if the topic is serious then I'll take them seriously

but then this is just my opinion
to each his own

You view using the english language correctly as seriousness and I view it as having intelligence. I cant read something and interpret their meaning if I can barely comprehend it. The rules that we use when writing? Arent just there for "seriousness". They're there for writers to use, and bend to their will.. to make their pieces more than what they seem.

Forgive me if I only wished for AO to have at least some intelligent writers of their trade.