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    Waiting For The Call...

    Waiting For The Call...


    All alone upstairs, Waiting for something to begin
    As the rain keeps falling, And the windows foged up
    I'm siting on the bed holding my phone, Waiting for the call to come
    "Call me" is what I whisper to myself, As I cry silently to no one...

    "I'm crying upstairs all alone"

    I remember the happier days, The one's filled with smiles
    But now all I seem to do is cry, Till I fall asleep in the end
    It hurts so much, Being here all alone without you
    I keep hopeing that you will call, But in the end you never will again...

    "Never call me again"

    As I walk down the street, I think that I saw you walkin ahead
    I chase after you,Hopeing to try and catch up with you
    But once I do, You turn around and begin to disappear right before me
    I stand there shocked, I fall to my knees and scream!...

    "Why did you have to leave me?"

    I walk by all our favorite places, I can bearly hold in my tears
    I can't help but to think of you, Everyday it's the samething
    I keep glanceing at the phone, Hopeing that it will ring and praying that it's you on the other end
    But it will never be you again, Cause you can't call not anymore...

    "You wont call me no more"

    Why'd you have to go, Why couldn't you stay with me?
    I can still remember that day, Just as if it were yesterday
    The rain was pouring down so hard that night, The streets were even tryin to flood
    But you said that you had to go, And you up and left me completely...

    "You left me all alone on that rainy night"

    I keep looking out my window on the rainy nights, Hopeing to see you pull up
    I hear other cars drive by and almost jump up to see, But it's never gonna be you
    I keep a tight hold onto my phone, Begging it to ring for me
    But that's just wishful thinking, Cause even if it did it wouldn't be you...

    "It's not gonna be you anymore"

    All alone upstairs, Waiting for something to begin
    As the rain keeps falling, And the windows foged up
    I'm siting on the bed holding my phone, Waiting for the call to come
    "Call me" is what I whisper to myself, As I cry silently to no one...

    "I'm crying upstairs all alone and thinking about you"

    I remember the happier days, The one's filled with smiles
    But now all I seem to do is cry, Till I fall asleep in the end
    It hurts so much, Being here all alone without you
    I keep hopeing that you will call, But in the end you never will again...

    "Never call me again, Never gonna call me again not anymore"

    I'm sittin all alone in my room with the lights turned off, Watching as the rain falls harder
    Holding onto my phone tightly, As I stare out into the real world
    I wish that I would have done more to make you stay, But I wish that it wasn't fate
    Waiting for your call, But it's not gonna come since your gone now and forever...

    "I miss your smile that reached your eyes each time.
    I miss your voice as you laughed and joked.
    I miss you most of all cause i'm never gonna see you again.
    Your really gone now.Why did you have to leave me all alone?"

    I'm sittin here all alone in the dark crying and waiting for you to call....
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    Re: Waiting For The Call...

    Awesome job Angel!!! I love this song and I know what that feels like to want someone to call as you wait all alone! Outstanding job as always and you know your fox had to leave my paw prints on this song! I love it!

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    Re: Waiting For The Call...

    Thank you sooooooooooooooo much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it. I've been working on it for the past few days and finally got it done lol.Yeah.I was thinking about my cousin who passed away last week while writting this,so I guess it's kinda about him and yet not ya know.But thanks again as always.
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    Re: Waiting For The Call...

    That is such a sweet and sad poem. It makes me think os ones I've lost thinking I'm gonna hear from them or I'll walk down the street and I"ll see them knowing I never will again. I loved it. Great job sis. I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Yeah Shini you really are amazing with the songs you write! I'm glad that you post them and give us all a chance to read them and understand what's going on! Keep up the good work Angel and I'm proud of you!

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    @ CherryBlossom18-Thank you soooooooooooooooo very much for the sweet comment. *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it. Yeah..that's why I wrote it.I was thinking of my younger cousin that passed away while I was writing this.So it's kinda for the memory of him. Thanks again sis.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooooooo much Fox *hugs* I couldn't do it without you and eveyone of my friends here at AO.I'm glad that others can enjoy my work just as much as I do writing them. Thanks again Fox,your the best!
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    Re: Waiting For The Call...

    Lately im feelin' kinda broken
    Like a man that swerves through the world
    And I ain't got no explanation
    And if I did I know I'd sound absurb

    Yea but I can't change a thing
    No matter what I do, you don't care what I say
    I can't hide the pain anymore
    Oooh, I'm going away

    Just a need a way to keep the rain out
    And land with both feet on the ground

    But everytime I go and stand up on my own
    You come along, you come along and then you knock me down

    Yea but I can't change a thing
    No matter what I do, you don't care what I say
    I can't hide the pain anymore
    Ohhh, I'm going away

    Maybe I'd break out for the mountains
    Maybe I could head to Mexico
    When you comin' beggin', plead you said baby please don't leave
    Well I made up my mind I made up my mind it's time to go

    Yea but I can't change a thing
    No matter what you do, I dont care what you say
    'Cause I can't hide the pain anymore, ohhh i'm going away

    Oohh i'm going away

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Waiting For The Call...

    i thought i read something like this...or am i just imagining it?anyway,this one matches the standard of all your previous ones...it's sweet and it touches people's hearts..well my heart at least.i enjoyed it.

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