Waiting on Dad.

As you can see most of my poems are dedicated to my father and are a tad bit on the emo side. Thank you for ya'lls responses.

She can't remember his face any more
Deep inside that's what she's looking for
She can't recall some of the fun they had
and all the times she said "I love you dad"
not even the eyes looking down on her
When she was brought into this world
She tries so hard to have one picture
Just one image of him sitting with her
She can't bring herself all the way
Back into those hospital plagued days
That's the only thing her mind recieves
The only thing her heart can believe
That her daddy was dying her whole life
He never could get up and kiss her night
He never was able to hold her close to him
Just try to smile through all the medicane
That's the only memories she'll ever have
Just sitting in the hospital waiting on dad

that was sad *boo hoo* i liked it though

Wow O.o That was really good, I give you a 10 out of 10 I can understand what is happening ^^ good job.

that was a good poem.. nice job.

awesome poem, keep it up.

was this the same one with the bad mom and the praying dad?

Very cute. I love the rhyme technique in this poem.

This poem is great! I understand the emotion of this poem! Great Job!!!