Bravo Bro! Each line describes a person's thoughts in the poem! I like the way you wrote this and you still amaze me! Bro your poems still amaze me! Keep up the good work Bro! I got you if you need me! AO Bro's till the end!![]()
She said i got to go hope i left
a message for you on window's
i wait she leaves not sure where
she might be now.
I wait she stays silent never saying
what is going on driving my mind i
insane as i still remember those words
as i waited and never got a message from her.
A few hours past and still no word as
i worry more then they turn to days
as i never give up and i wait never
knowing what message she never sent me.
this poem is short for a reason it about
online romances or dating and how they
affect some people ,for most it can be
awesome and something that will bring them
close for others will end like this most likely
where they keep there word to a person who
is vague about everything. leaving questions.
myself i am happy with what i have , but for most it
would end like this with them crying.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Bravo Bro! Each line describes a person's thoughts in the poem! I like the way you wrote this and you still amaze me! Bro your poems still amaze me! Keep up the good work Bro! I got you if you need me! AO Bro's till the end!![]()
That was a cute poem. I guess online love can go like that sometimes. If you were dating someone online and if they would make an effort to come visit you then it wouldn't be so bad. I'm sure your next one will be just as good.
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Yeah I know what you mean, Chris. This poem explained it pretty well. The way you put in the lines about waiting was nice. Can't wait to read another.
(oh and I think that personreally did send it, maybe it got stuck somewhere)
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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