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    Waiting for That Next Chat!!!

    She said i got to go hope i left
    a message for you on window's
    i wait she leaves not sure where
    she might be now.

    I wait she stays silent never saying
    what is going on driving my mind i
    insane as i still remember those words
    as i waited and never got a message from her.

    A few hours past and still no word as
    i worry more then they turn to days
    as i never give up and i wait never
    knowing what message she never sent me.


    this poem is short for a reason it about
    online romances or dating and how they
    affect some people ,for most it can be
    awesome and something that will bring them
    close for others will end like this most likely
    where they keep there word to a person who
    is vague about everything. leaving questions.
    myself i am happy with what i have , but for most it
    would end like this with them crying.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Waiting for That Next Chat!!!

    Bravo Bro! Each line describes a person's thoughts in the poem! I like the way you wrote this and you still amaze me! Bro your poems still amaze me! Keep up the good work Bro! I got you if you need me! AO Bro's till the end!

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    Re: Waiting for That Next Chat!!!

    That was a cute poem. I guess online love can go like that sometimes. If you were dating someone online and if they would make an effort to come visit you then it wouldn't be so bad. I'm sure your next one will be just as good.
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    Re: Waiting for That Next Chat!!!

    Yeah I know what you mean, Chris. This poem explained it pretty well. The way you put in the lines about waiting was nice. Can't wait to read another.

    (oh and I think that person really did send it, maybe it got stuck somewhere)
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