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    waiting shouldnt hurt

    The beat of my heart is slow.
    I lie here on this cold ground.
    My tears are only for you.
    I pain is takeing over.
    My breath is drifting.
    All I can say before I leave is.
    I leave this place were your face holds.
    All the things I lived for.
    I dont know where im going.
    My blood is runing low.
    I leave my heart here.
    Where the little peace of heavan.
    Opens up the dark.
    My last breath is here.
    I waste it on your name.
    The darkness is here.
    All my pain has brought me here.
    So now I wait in the dark for you.
    To bring my little peace of heavan.
    Thats held in your eyes.
    by leftinthedark aka nicole!

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    Re: waiting shouldnt hurt

    a few spelling mistakes... but the poem is still good ^^ i love the imaginary in here... nice work...

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    Re: waiting shouldnt hurt

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    a few spelling mistakes... but the poem is still good ^^ i love the imaginary in here... nice work...
    thanks yea im really bad at spelling thats why i dont write alot!

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    It was a wonderful... I am waiting for this at the moment as is a few other people i know... but i am waiting for something else... anyway.. it was a good poem that was written well... I hope you write some more.. it is a good poem..l Keep up the great work.

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    ah im sorry im not good at spelling and crap! hey at least i keep trying insteed of giveing up!

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    Re: waiting shouldnt hurt

    That is the way to go Nicole. just keep at it and never give up. anwyays good poem shows how you really feel and or felt about this person you are writing about I love it keep up the good work alright? cant wait to see more.
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