Oh... My... GOD!!!
Have you like... Been reading my mind or something? Because I swear you just wrote my every thought and made them more vivid, more descriptive! I really like this piece alot! It reminds me of the time I've spent waiting... Wanting...
This was very touching and I like how you were able to note time/season changes while keeping the flow of the poem real smooth! You get a friggin' gold star!!
Kudos!!!! ~S
@ BlueFox1-Thanks sooooooooooooo much for the awesome comment Fox!!!! *hugs*I'm glad that you thought I did well with it.It's been awhile I know lol but finally somethin huh lol.Thanks again Fox!!
@ atomik_sprout-Wow...thanks!!! *hugs* I was just thinking about someone who is very special to me and I ended up writting this.But i'm so glad that you enjoyed it so much.Thanks for reading!!
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
That was really good! As usual! I could definitely feel the emotion behind it....and that made it all the more believable!
DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP
Shinigami's_Angel (Dec 22, 2007)
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