Interesting poem. You're improving on your spelling a bit more. So...................I think I know what this is involving. Anyways, you knew what was up and it was just a damn game. Reset..........
As night time covers the sky so does the love from my heart
no matter the distance between us mine heart will always have
thee near me ,as my soul finds solace in the the knowledge
that my waiting for thee is worth the anguish that my heart suffers
for the want and need of your love.
The time is near for my heart to come to it's finale beat as my
dreams and hops of that first kiss dwindle down to nothingness.
as i see your face fade in my final moment's in this life ,an angel
can be heard calling my name as i break my promise and leave
this world knowing i cant wait for you anymore.
I then picture you on a cool winters day by the sea shore
as the mist rises of the ocean as the sun comes up reflecting
it's beauty on the surface of the crashing Tide's see you walk
away with him smiling always happy never knowing sadness,
as you hold his hand and kiss him.
and as your lips meet once more in that passion which i craved
from you but never got because of loves cruel fate , i lie hear
and fade as you live your life with smiles like i wanted , love
for me is never meant to be ,love flees from me. love avoids me.
nothing i do will give me the love i seek ,but a promise kept
me going until.........nothing , i am dead i am sorry the promise
i made cant be kept .
Be always happy my love because i held out for you
never had anyone because i loved you so i hope this
make you happy knowing i lived and died alone just
for the chance of you running to me.
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Nov 10, 2006 at 06:37 AM.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Interesting poem. You're improving on your spelling a bit more. So...................I think I know what this is involving. Anyways, you knew what was up and it was just a damn game. Reset..........
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
I really liked it Chris, I thought it was very sweet though sad and I could picture everything clearly. I thought it was written very nicely, good job.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
Bro this poem is cool! Like Sincere said it is very sweet yet sad, but it kept my attention through the whole poem!Keep it Bro! You're spelling is getting better, but you already knew that!
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yeah i did lol but i am getting better but i am still wanting to improve so
i can do something specail for somone with out having mistakes,and i hope i can get as good i want for them, and i like the fact that my improvment
comes from being here on AO i ahve read alot of poems that really make
me want to be better like sincere,shady k, and a few other that i love to read . i will keep imrpoving as i keep writing
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
wow man that was pretty awesome. Check the spelling of some words and fix them so the poem can be more kooler than it is now.
i used spell check and it say's there is nothing ewrong with
it mayby i didnt word something the right way, but thanks for the tip
i will see where i messed up ketaro
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Full of emotions compressed in just one poem... Fantastic, never saw like this one before... I liked it very much...
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