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    Walk Beside Me

    Your beautiful smile
    Your beautiful face
    My mind is wondering
    Going in haste

    I want you to be near me
    I want you to be around
    I want to say I love you
    So I can sleep nice and sound

    Somehow you inspire me
    To be better than I am
    To be a decent person
    To be more than I am

    I want to walk beside you
    Someday across this earth
    Hand in hand, side by side
    To treat you as your worth

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    In just four paras you explained everything, impressive! The poem is even better when it's rhyming, well done.

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    but it is a worthy death o find.A beautiful poem...

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    I like this poem a lot! I like it because of it's like romance! I'm a sucker for romance things. Hope to see more!
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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    I like this poem very much, it's so nice and lovely, and dreamy.
    It was nice to read it, I love your love poems, they inspire me and remind me of what is love witch is really great and I'm really thankful for that...
    I'm looking forward to your next love poems, I hope you have this love to write about forever more!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I like this poem very much, it's so nice and lovely, and dreamy.
    It was nice to read it, I love your love poems, they inspire me and remind me of what is love witch is really great and I'm really thankful for that...
    I'm looking forward to your next love poems, I hope you have this love to write about forever more!
    Thanx everyone... I am happy that you like them.

    Lasura... i am glad that they inspire you and remind you of love but the love you speak of is no longer there.... The love that once bloomed has now vanished... He is half a world away and to this day i keep reminding myself that love, although sweet and desired, takes your heart and rips it in two as much as possible.... Granted I do love him.... alot but for somereason as the days pass the reality of the fact that I will most likely never see him is more than i can handle.... I speak of love often but love is nothing more than a illusion....

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    ^ *sigh* I knew this would happen...
    I know how you feel... I to think of love as an illusion, but I adore this illusion so much that I'm ready to hold on to it 'till something makes me understand that it's truly impossible... And I too feel that love is ripping my heart to pieces every day...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Walk Beside Me

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    ^ *sigh* I knew this would happen...
    I know how you feel... I to think of love as an illusion, but I adore this illusion so much that I'm ready to hold on to it 'till something makes me understand that it's truly impossible... And I too feel that love is ripping my heart to pieces every day...
    Well any way I wrote a poem for rave and equinn...

    it was orginally ment for me and my love but sadly we are about to me no more... for once he reads the message I sent him I will be a single once again...

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