He was chosen to change fate,
In a life he did hate.
The wars between them would be many,
Survivors few, if at all any.
The enemies’ army had all the might,
To look upon them was such a sight.
Behind him he had pitiful few,
But in their enemies eyes they grew.
To be a force of unstoppable power,
Who lead them to their final hour.
Tell me what you really think about this one.
I like your rhyming. Very good. I'm wondering who this is about though. It's a pretty short written poem with little detail. Yet, I still like it. ^_^ Good job!
I don't relly understand what r u talking abot, but u'r poem is sick.
Well I recently watched the movie 300,
and I know the greek mythology about the 300 greeks (Not Spartans) who held off the Persians.
so I decided to write a tribute poem to them.....
Call me a hatter if you must. I am just that way.