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    War

    War

    He was chosen to change fate,
    In a life he did hate.
    The wars between them would be many,
    Survivors few, if at all any.

    The enemies’ army had all the might,
    To look upon them was such a sight.
    Behind him he had pitiful few,
    But in their enemies eyes they grew.

    To be a force of unstoppable power,
    Who lead them to their final hour.

    Tell me what you really think about this one.

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    Re: War

    I like your rhyming. Very good. I'm wondering who this is about though. It's a pretty short written poem with little detail. Yet, I still like it. ^_^ Good job!


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    Re: War

    I don't relly understand what r u talking abot, but u'r poem is sick.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: War

    Well I recently watched the movie 300,
    and I know the greek mythology about the 300 greeks (Not Spartans) who held off the Persians.
    so I decided to write a tribute poem to them.....
    Call me a hatter if you must. I am just that way.

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