War and pieces.

Mattness · May 07, 2007, 09:29 AM

War is like and old car.
Broken, like the lives of men.
Without that drive to keep the charge,
turned to grass and dirt.
Graveyards full, the war is done.
We have run short on gas.

Raimann · May 08, 2007, 10:32 PM

simple and great similies. if it was longer, it would be more enjoyable, and this poem could be a great opener for a longer one. think about it.

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