Fighting ... Crawling
In a constant struggle to escape
The depths of darkness that surrounds each of us
Grasping at every shard of light
Slowly we pull ourselve out of the night
Out of the hands of Dispair and Depression
As one by one we emerge
Basking in the warmth
Warmth that was once so far away
We smile in the dawn of a new day
It's a little short and I'm not really sure about the title
so if you have any suggestions let me know =]
Indeed it is short, though the message is complete and inspiring. There is a feeling of evolution from a negative state to a positive state, which creates a nice feeling of development.
depths
grasping
emerge
basking
Those words are nicely used.
Final words: short, good vocabulary, all in all, a great read. But I do tend to like long texts as they often offer more insight on the skill of the writer. Cya next read
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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awwww thanks Soldat!!! lol
I'm not really good with long ones I tend to make them really corny lol >. but glad you liked it
yeah the message was more about not giving up and eventually finding happiness
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