As it rain upon me
Am stuck in this mud
A sword in my hands
Death runs in my blood
Marks of a warrior
Spirit of a fighter
Strength from the mountains
I am longer a writer
Hands holding a spear
Arms holding a shield
A warrior with no armor
Dying on the battlefield
I know its short lol, so please comment.
My my...this poem goes with your username :p hellknight...
but...what is the theme of this poem...what does it signifies my question is...
other than that...not a bad poem ^^
thats really cool it sounds like a worrior at war am i right??????????
well its short but good ^__^
This a short poem that is alos very good. I like it.I hope to see more of your work. (^.^)
Thanks you guys for awesome comments and I hope that I do better next time for my poem, again thank you.