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    Wash Away The Pain

    This is a song I wrote


    Verse1:
    I've been walking for so long
    It seems like its been years
    I feel the rain pour down on me
    Is this my destiny?
    I feel the walls close around me

    Chorus:
    Please can you take away the pain
    Because the rain seems to not due
    I'm suffering from a broken soul
    Oh what is to heal me now?
    I hope
    Oh baby I hope you can
    Wash away my pain

    Verse 2:
    I'm like an animal trapped in a cage
    Here I stand upon this cliff
    Looking down at the ocean
    As the wind blows
    I make one last praise
    Before I fall and let the waters
    Take a hold of me

    Chorus:
    Please can you take away the pain
    Because the rain seems to not due
    I'm suffering from a broken soul
    Oh what is to heal me now?
    I hope
    Oh baby I hope you can
    Wash away my pain

    Now my pain now fades away from me

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    great song !

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    damn cool song man. I see your new here. Hey I'm Yumiko. Welcome to AO and enjoy yourself

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    Sure ok then. And thanks I guess

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    *smiles* What a lovely song. I've seen your profile, you must have been playing your guitar when you made this song. It's quite beautiful
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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    oh my god class i love it keep it up ^__^

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    OMG impeccable! Awesome song ^^

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    Re: Wash Away The Pain

    Nice song I could imagine a tune and everything!

    But I didn't get the last bit of this line:

    Because the rain seems to not due
    Could you explain please?

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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