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    Wasted Effort

    I wrote this poem to go with Peach_Follows' poem, Sex Upstairs.

    Please read that before reading this.

    Here's the link: Sex Upstairs

    Wasted Effort

    I knew this was the time
    I knew this was the night
    My girl and I would be as one
    Merging with delight

    I started to embrace
    That gentle warming skin
    But inside she was calling out
    "C'mon, let's just begin!"

    We went on and on
    It seemed we'd never stop
    We wanted to keep going
    Until our bodies dropped

    Then we heard a noise
    It was our neighbor, Peach
    She turned up her TV
    So politeness she could teach

    I really didn't care
    We just tuned it out
    I was in some kinda ecstasy
    I didn't have a doubt

    The TV just got louder
    And much to my dismay
    My girlfriend stopped and said
    "With this noise, there's just no way."

    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Wasted Effort

    Thx to peach... we are getting such nice poems like that made or inspired... :rolleye1: xD

    A very good poem.. love the description... keep up the good work

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    Re: Wasted Effort

    Yay, for my loud TV!...... LOL ^^

    This was great! I really love the comeback. BTW tell your girlfriend I'm sorry, and perhaps invest in a quieter bed.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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