Wasted Gifts

hiya!!!

wrote this in september for my drama class. this ISN'T about christmas presents but something else. this is only a rough draft, i know a few lines could use some changes. lets see if u guys can guess my topic. actually its really easy. as always please comment. i would like to hear any critizism you guys might have. anyway happy reading.

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Gifts, Gifts, Gifts

Some people have eyes
yet never see the world
Some people have legs
yet never run around
Some people have a nose
yet never smell the roses

Gifts, Gifts, Gifts

Some people have a voice
yet never speak
Some people have a mind
yet never think
Some people have arms
yet never reach out

Gifts, Gifts, Gifts

Some people have health
yet they choose to ruin it
Everyone has a heart
yet some choose to hate
Everyone has a life
But some choose to end it

Choice, Choice, Choice

The greatest gift in life is choice,
everyday we choose to use our gifts,
but some never get the chance to make that choice.

Gifts, Gifts, Gifts
Choice, Choice, Choice

How many have gone to waste?

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Well I had to take some time to address this. As it seemed thoughtfully written it deserves thoughtful feedback.

This poem isn't wordy (no big vocab show offs). In fact, composition wise, its fairly simple.
But it's complexity shines in the concept. Rich in thought.
At the end, you declare that choice is the ultimate gift.
While throughout the poem, you display how we use choice to waste away the many gifts we have.
I think this poem is very well written and thought out.