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    Watashi no Ai...

    I stand in the mists
    Of what can be revealing
    What grabbed my soul;
    Turned me indifferent?
    Was it you that captured me?

    meguru meguru toki no naka de
    bokutachi wa? ai wo sagashiteiru
    ~Round and round in looping time
    We are searching for love~


    Is it destiny that attracts us to one another?
    Is this true that I feel the way I do?
    Hold on to me and love me
    For I wish this is real

    Kasoku shiteku sakai yo
    Douka yasashii mama de ite
    Setsunai hodo mune utsu afure dasu negai
    ~Oh, accelerating world...Somehow be kind...
    Overflowing hopes and dreams are throbbing my heart~


    Let me breathe your love
    Hold me closer and never let go
    I cry my pain from past hurts...

    toomawari shita yo ne
    kizutsuke atta yo ne
    ~We went the long way, didn't we?
    We got hurt, didn't we?~


    I pray to the night
    I wish that you are real;
    That this is real...

    Omoi o ima kanadete
    aisubeki mono no tame
    ai o kureru mono no tame dekiru koto
    ~My heart is singing out
    For that which I should love,
    For that which gives me love, I will do what I can.~
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    Re: Watashi no Ai...

    Great poem! Two thumbs up really! I simply enjoy reading it! It seem so romantic or really great to read well to me sorry but yeah! I loved how you put half of it in Japanese I think so I hope to see more!
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    Re: Watashi no Ai...

    This is great!!! I love the way you put in lines in Japanese language... it's really great!!!! This could be a wonderful song... And the things you say... wonderful!!! Just what I think about my love...

    I really, really enjoyed reading this!!! And I'm really waiting forward for something else like this!!!!

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    Re: Watashi no Ai...

    I absolutely love how you put in the Japanese parts! A very good poem indeed!



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    Re: Watashi no Ai...

    japenese awesome i love that u put japenese also ♥daprincess
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Watashi no Ai...

    Thank you everyone!! I'm glad you all enjoyed my poem. I'm really glad you all were fond of the japanese parts!! I haven't yet to seen anyone who had Japanese in their poems so I decided to put some! hehe
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