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    watch and see

    when you heat my
    voice you cringe
    i scare you and my name
    makes you cinge

    i put fear in your heart
    and visions in your brain
    when its said and done
    you be like me-clinically insane

    youll rather slice your own wrists
    than spen another minute with me
    the visions i gave you is
    my past; watch and see

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    Re: watch and see

    WOW! Umm....very intresting. Good poem though strike fear into someone's heart. I like that sound. Sounds like your trying to prove a point with someone or make them mad.

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    Re: watch and see

    Quote Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover View Post
    when you heat my
    voice you cringe
    i scare you and my name
    makes you cinge

    i put fear in your heart
    and visions in your brain
    when its said and done
    you be like me-clinically insane

    youll rather slice your own wrists
    than spen another minute with me
    the visions i gave you is
    my past; watch and see
    I like this one too^^ it makes me think of what i would have rather done when i was around certain people...^^ keep upi the good work^^

    >^.^<

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    Re: watch and see

    It's life!!!! It must be life writing to someone ^^ That's how I see it... and people- don't make life sad and angry by leaving it, it might turn its back on your friends ^^

    Nice work, and the fact that it's short gives the possibility for people to be able to interpretend this in many ways, witch I find very good...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: watch and see

    wow thanks everyone for the comments im glad yu like it

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