WOW! Umm....very intresting. Good poem though strike fear into someone's heart. I like that sound. Sounds like your trying to prove a point with someone or make them mad.
when you heat my
voice you cringe
i scare you and my name
makes you cinge
i put fear in your heart
and visions in your brain
when its said and done
you be like me-clinically insane
youll rather slice your own wrists
than spen another minute with me
the visions i gave you is
my past; watch and see
WOW! Umm....very intresting. Good poem though strike fear into someone's heart. I like that sound. Sounds like your trying to prove a point with someone or make them mad.
It's life!!!! It must be life writing to someone ^^ That's how I see it... and people- don't make life sad and angry by leaving it, it might turn its back on your friends ^^
Nice work, and the fact that it's short gives the possibility for people to be able to interpretend this in many ways, witch I find very good...
wow thanks everyone for the comments im glad yu like it
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