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  1. Nov 06, 2007 10:43 PM #1
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    Watch what you say

    These walls have ears.

    Watch what you say.

    Assumptions about you are being made.
    RIGHT
    NOW....
    Someone out there....

    They think they know you.

    Trying to put your puzzle together with 2nd hand,
    twisted pieces

    And the scary part is.
    Whatever THEY come up with....
    However they precieve you....
    That is the "truth" that everyone will see.
    Ther REAL you? Is whatever they want you to be.

    These walls can talk.

    They'll paint a nasty picture.

    So watch what you say.
    Watch who you trust.
    Your life could be a rumor.
    ... Not Ever Again...
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  2. Nov 07, 2007 03:40 AM #2
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    Re: Watch what you say

    @.@ hmm.. interesting way of writing this... it's like looking in the diary of a pshyco or someone very confused...angry ect ect...

    a nice poem... a very different style... suprised me... @.@ nice..
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  3. Nov 07, 2007 06:35 AM #3
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    Re: Watch what you say

    Yes! Yes!.... Thats exactly what I was going for! Like a paranoid delusional. Im glad somone understood and gave me feedback. Not surprised at all that it was you RayMe ... You always give the awesome comments.
    Hmmm... Im in a good mood today. Anyway, thanks again.
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  4. Nov 07, 2007 06:42 AM #4
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    Re: Watch what you say

    Lol.. i am relieved i can understand it.. i dont give awesome comments... ty ^^

    sure.. you are welcomed.. keep up the good work ok
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    Re: Watch what you say

    I like the poem. But the formatting made my head hurt a little. It was a little difficult to tell which line came first. If that makes sence.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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    Re: Watch what you say

    THAT WAS Cool! I love how it was placed, and the words of course! Keep it up! Nice to see one of the poems!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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  7. Nov 07, 2007 12:27 PM #7
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    Re: Watch what you say

    A pretty nice poem. Yeah, like what others said, the format is confusing at first. But, good work and keep it up. :3
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