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Old Nov 06, 2007, 10:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Watch what you say

These walls have ears.

Watch what you say.

Assumptions about you are being made.
RIGHT
NOW....
Someone out there....

They think they know you.

Trying to put your puzzle together with 2nd hand,
twisted pieces

And the scary part is.
Whatever THEY come up with....
However they precieve you....
That is the "truth" that everyone will see.
Ther REAL you? Is whatever they want you to be.

These walls can talk.

They'll paint a nasty picture.

So watch what you say.
Watch who you trust.
Your life could be a rumor.
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 03:40 AM   #2 (permalink)
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@.@ hmm.. interesting way of writing this... it's like looking in the diary of a pshyco or someone very confused...angry ect ect...

a nice poem... a very different style... suprised me... @.@ nice..
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 06:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes! Yes!.... Thats exactly what I was going for! Like a paranoid delusional. Im glad somone understood and gave me feedback. Not surprised at all that it was you RayMe ... You always give the awesome comments.
Hmmm... Im in a good mood today. Anyway, thanks again.
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 06:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Lol.. i am relieved i can understand it.. i dont give awesome comments... ty ^^

sure.. you are welcomed.. keep up the good work ok
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 10:16 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Watch what you say

I like the poem. But the formatting made my head hurt a little. It was a little difficult to tell which line came first. If that makes sence.
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 11:10 AM   #6 (permalink)
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THAT WAS Cool! I love how it was placed, and the words of course! Keep it up! Nice to see one of the poems!
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Old Nov 07, 2007, 12:27 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Watch what you say

A pretty nice poem. Yeah, like what others said, the format is confusing at first. But, good work and keep it up. :3
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