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    Watching from afar

    Upon that hill I once stood,
    A beautiful song I once heard,
    I turned toward that voice,
    Enchanted by its sound,
    My soul reached out to its beauty,

    I found myself lying at your feet,
    Looking up at you, I awaited persecution,
    But your eyes alighted and a smile washed across your face,
    You held out your hand and I embraced your pain,
    As you did mine,

    I knew than, and even now,
    That if you were to leave, my love would not fall,
    If there were hate, still no change,
    For you had given me such a gift,
    So that my love has become immortal,

    I am luck yet unworthy,
    Still you concern yourself of my own,
    Now that I am next to you,
    I no long watch from afar.


    This is a message that I want to go to someone.. I wrote this off of another one I wrote that I didnt like...
    Thank you Lasura!
    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: Watching from afar

    kool poem i lone the way its wrote and i think its an A1 poem
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Watching from afar

    Gee...I wonder who this is for? **laughs evilly** Anyways, really good poem!!!! Kudos to you! **claps**

    DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP

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    Re: Watching from afar

    Great improvement on ur last one, just execpt for the last line where it should say I no longer watch from afar either than it's a great love poem rk.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Woow~ i am touched by the sweetness of the poem! *applauds*

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