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Reply With QuoteYou have a really good talent with poetry. ^^ The ending stanza was very good; it fit well with the entire poem.
I liked that one the best. ^^As I watch the world
I weep and I cry
For the friend I lost
As I moved on by.
As I watch the world
Somthing caught my eye
Somthing brighter than a star
Somthing I could never reach for.
You were untouchable
You were a dream
You felt like a friend
And in the end
You were nothing.
Nothing but a liar
Nothing but a cheat
Nothing but somthing
Somthing but nothing.
As I watch the world
I weep and I cry
For the friend I lost
As I moved on by.
I got farther and farther
in to the black
I went deeper and deeper
untill there was nothing but black.
As I watch the world
And i see you walk by
I reach out for a moment
and you just slip on by.
I am nothing but somthing
I am somthing but nothing.
In the end i was nothing but a friend
In the end i was Nothing
Not even a friend.
As I watch The world
Somthing caught my eye
As I watch the world
You walked on by.
You have a really good talent with poetry. ^^ The ending stanza was very good; it fit well with the entire poem.
I liked that one the best. ^^As I watch the world
I weep and I cry
For the friend I lost
As I moved on by.
WOW... that was pretty damn good i can feel were the poem is comming from you are really good i hope to read more from you keep up the good workand dont stop writting i look forward to your next one
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Your poetry sucks and has killed several hundred children merely by existing.
um ok I don't know what is up with that last one (really i just don't care) but thanx. i plan to writ more
That's beautiful, LL. Good work.
Nothing that's worth doing in life is easy.
Nice poem man, keep writting poems like that.
very impressive!! keep up the good work
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
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