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  1. Nov 04, 2007 11:40 PM #1
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    wating..... #2

    this one is weard i made it for my other poems the ones well i hope u like it srry is its not good

    the wateing the wondering has paied off no more darkness no more sadness the light has shown through i can take off the painful masks that kep me from showing my true colors happness,gracefulness,crateviness the one has shown me how to take em off the one my shay

    the hope i was surching for the hope i found the hope i need i can still show happyness,joy,love and they wont be just masks they will be true feeling i feel like a hollow ripping his mask off and becoming real agen the one and only who help me through is my shay

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    this is my old poem so ready for commets u can be blunt
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  2. Nov 04, 2007 11:48 PM #2
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    Re: wating..... #2

    hmmm... @.@ it's a nice poem... but...its a shame about the wrong spellings though...and i think the flow is not that good too... hmm... you can do better next time.. keep it up.. ^^ start with improving your spelling...the internet has uses... or use microsoft windows to check for spellings while you are writing your poem ^^

    a nice try ^^

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  3. Nov 04, 2007 11:49 PM #3
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    Re: wating..... #2

    its bloody great well done great job
    i hope we can see more of it
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  4. Nov 05, 2007 07:04 AM #4
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    Re: wating..... #2

    nice job! A few spelling errors but nice indeed! Keep up the good work! Can't wait fo rmore!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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