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    Wating for a wanted love.

    One of my poems I know mine suck XD lol well here it gose..

    Waiting for a wanted love


    I am sitting here on a bench in the park
    Waiting for you to come
    As the rain starts to fall I realize
    that you will never show today.

    Waiting on a love that never will come
    is so hard and depressing
    Each day that passes my heart grows cold
    you were the one I wanted
    you were the one I loved with all my heart

    Again I sit her the next day
    Waiting for you to show
    Again disappointed I go home
    I cry my self to sleep
    Wishing I could be in your arms
    But you do not love me that way
    I want you in my heart
    But the door will be closed forever


    I am never meant to be loved
    I am meant to walk this world alone
    No one to hold hands with
    No one to watch the stars with
    No one to be there when I need them
    I will forever be alone

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    Re: Wating for a wanted love.

    Punctuation would have created a better flow.
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    Re: Wating for a wanted love.

    awww thats a sweet poem Sinistra!!

    I think it flowed well!
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