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Old Dec 13, 2006, 11:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Wating for a wanted love.

One of my poems I know mine suck XD lol well here it gose..

Waiting for a wanted love


I am sitting here on a bench in the park
Waiting for you to come
As the rain starts to fall I realize
that you will never show today.

Waiting on a love that never will come
is so hard and depressing
Each day that passes my heart grows cold
you were the one I wanted
you were the one I loved with all my heart

Again I sit her the next day
Waiting for you to show
Again disappointed I go home
I cry my self to sleep
Wishing I could be in your arms
But you do not love me that way
I want you in my heart
But the door will be closed forever


I am never meant to be loved
I am meant to walk this world alone
No one to hold hands with
No one to watch the stars with
No one to be there when I need them
I will forever be alone
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Old Dec 14, 2006, 02:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Wating for a wanted love.

Punctuation would have created a better flow.
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Old Dec 14, 2006, 07:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Wating for a wanted love.

awww thats a sweet poem Sinistra!!

I think it flowed well!
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