Waves Crashing Upon The Shore (Revised)

Waves crashing upon the shore
Flowing fast past your feet
Always leaves you wanting more
Heart is pounding faster with every beat

If you see my soul
Please tell it to come home
I need it now before I fold
Need it to stop its constant roams

Need now to be made of steel
In order to make it up the hill
Need courage for my will
For my heart has love her still

Waves crashing upon the shore
Flowing fast past you feet
Always leaves you wanting more
Heart is pounding faster with every beat.


This is an old one that I revised recently. I'm tryin' ta get back inta writin' and drawin'. Have been doin' much of either in the past year. Hope evry1 likes it.:cool3:

Sonds good, nice flow/rythm..... I like it :D it's very good Joe Mage... Keep it up, i hope to see more ^^

Definately get back into writing... A few small errors, but other than that... This is worthy of publishing.

Thnx. Glad u like it. I, hopefully, will b doin' more in the up comin' days. We'll c.:cool3:

Very nicely done!!!!!
Keep up the great work!!!!

:p1::smile::p1::smile:

Lol ^^ yup...this is nice...since theres a stanza which is written twice...i suggest u make it longer...and make it like a song.. :)