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    Waves Of Darkness

    You wished i had you in my arms and there you were
    riding in the palms of waves that shroud over me and
    i concern myself of hope and try to disregard the despair
    in my eyes that makes me want to hold you forever and
    would love to see you happy but when you go into the

    deep dark waves over the other side that i even try to stop
    you form going i admire your thoughts and greatness i even
    try to let you go but life gets us together when we get apart

    from each other, and i try to tell you how much i feel you in
    my heart i try to hold these tears from inside myself it bothers
    me when you go to that rigid waves of shadow i even try to

    flow with it but when i forgive you i force myself to drown myself
    in it i wish not to see you sad only happiness i want form you
    that is the only thing i wish for in life.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: Waves Of Darkness

    Ahh... such a dark, and sad and still lovely poem... I like it really much and I enjoyed reading it... Made me really dreamy and no, it's not just because it's after midnight... ^^ lol
    A nice work dark1angel!!!!!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Waves Of Darkness

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Ahh... such a dark, and sad and still lovely poem... I like it really much and I enjoyed reading it... Made me really dreamy and no, it's not just because it's after midnight... ^^ lol
    A nice work dark1angel!!!!!!!!
    Thank you, and i would like to post a new one to make it more intresting and also have a better feeling then darkness all the time it is because i am used to the dark never enjoyed myself in the light well it seems this poem made you dreamy as i can tell well i'll make it more dreamy how would that sound?
    Well my time in this poem has been really significant and besides i took the risk into putting this one is because what i truly felt about typing it up and once i put the pieces together it felt like a true life of new hopes and dreams with this person that i truly admire i cant tell the name it might spoil the critique well hope you guys love to read this one as long as you like.

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    Re: Waves Of Darkness

    too dark and sad i didnt like it!!!too sad!!!lol im sorry if me hurt u!!!


    thank you equinn!!!!!!

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    Re: Waves Of Darkness

    Quote Originally Posted by fluff n pink View Post
    too dark and sad i didnt like it!!!too sad!!!lol im sorry if me hurt u!!!
    it is simply alrite to me it hurt to me write it and read it at the end i been really upset by that time now i am gloomy and it seems i have no other replacement to take care of me well i am not upset about you just the poem made me think about it more then i thought well try reading it carefully and there might be something hidden behind it ok well bye.

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