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    The way it ended...

    Broken, shattered, second chances,
    lost and gone,
    And all that I asked of you,
    was that we could love eachother,
    Now-a-days people say no way!
    She says no, things go down,
    You pull up,
    I draw closer in,
    The we get near,
    Down again,
    Youve "moved on" as they say
    A new relationship already?
    Oi! thats really odd,
    As of when?
    As of when did this begin?
    Oh? Was it with me?
    "Do you want to see me again?" she had said,
    "You bet that I do love, why whats dofferent?"
    She said that she loved me,
    Cheating no, apparently yes?
    At least I think so...
    Then she rolls to the phrase "I've got a new boyfriend
    and you oughtta be around to see us at my birthday party"
    I tried, I did "No! No way, no way..."
    But I didnt get to call her today...
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: The way it ended...

    Nice poem it sounds like she had planned to leave you for a while eventhough she seemed to love you,but apparently not enough to stay. I've been through that before and it was one of the worst thing I ever went through.
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    Re: The way it ended...

    FINALLY!!! Some one Noticed! BUt yeah she was datin some oter dude about a week before we stopped going out, and I dont really buy her reasons either, but was there any thing that Icould have really improved on it with?
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    Re: The way it ended...

    Very deep poem, so much meaning and feelings being let out. v.v I see..I'm very sorry to hear that. Well, I hope you find that "one" and move on.

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