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    The way is Lost

    The way is lost,
    Darkness has engulfed us.
    Light only exists in our hearts,
    Yet there is a seed of darkness.
    Tempted to kill for money,
    Lust after our desires,
    Strike out at our enemies.

    The way is lost,
    God has forsaken me,
    The devil rises and offers a deal,
    To sell your soul to the
    Man who has evil up his sleeve.
    Turn our back on those you once hold dear,
    And become the every thing u fear.

    The way is lost,
    Your heart has turn black,
    Your soul has been burnt,
    Your body has been scarred,
    Your eyes have become evil.
    You will stand in the rain of blood.

    The way is lost,
    The carnage is unstoppable.
    You fight against those who oppose you,
    You strike those down who are unwilling.
    You follow the simple law of nature itself,
    "The strong shall live, The weak shall perish."
    You fight against the angels and
    You turn them to the fallen angels of horrors.

    The way is lost,
    Darkness now rules the land,
    You who once followed the light,
    Now don the black armour.
    The devil rises to collect your soul,
    But you have none, for it was lost in the carnage.
    You strike the devil to his heart
    And take his throne.
    You become the Devil himself.
    Arise, Lucifier, ruler of Hell n Earth.

    This is my go at writing dark stuff. enjoy it.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: The way is Lost

    wow man that was awesome man, keep it up dude!!

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    Re: The way is Lost

    Awesome job yet again!

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    Re: The way is Lost

    I really like this one.

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    Re: The way is Lost

    Nice poem and wicked at that but keep up the good work.

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    Re: The way is Lost

    Wicked awesomeness at its best. ^_^ Anyway! I truly enjoyed reading along the lines through the entire poem, Blade. It flowed, lucidly. It seems like you cropped a lot of time into this poem. It's great. Keep up the great work.

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