Go Elreka! My favorite all day! You have to write more, I wanna read some others of yours. You're a, and I quote myself, you're a genious. Yes. I still remember Viper.Luved your poem, write more!!
YOU. Yes you. You think I'm a freak. Well you'll learn. Won't you? You have to. there is no choice.
You can't just not be suprised by how quikly I open up. I see the good. Untill you tick me off.
The scabs will heal and the cuts will get closer to my wrist but you'll forget no matter what.
Even If
I'm gone. When will you remember? That I care for you, wished the best of you, now the cuts are deep and the blood keeps pouring. Then will you remember?
That is the way my heart bounds me. I'm tied to you, my friends. You are doing this to me! This blood is your falt! The feeling of death creeps in my heart, the pain hurts so bad... Your makeing it worse!
I can't find my self. Your makeing it harder to see, I can't even see my self.
Your gripping my so tight I'm bleeding. The blood rushing out of my veins.
Your going blurry. Where have you gone? Please don't leave me! The fear inside grows within me. This is the part of me that worryies me the most. The feeling you don't see within me. You probably won't ever see.
My pulsing blood it pours from me...
Last edited by Elreka; May 23, 2006 at 06:44 PM.
Go Elreka! My favorite all day! You have to write more, I wanna read some others of yours. You're a, and I quote myself, you're a genious. Yes. I still remember Viper.Luved your poem, write more!!
Well thank you ... this was actualy a poem 4 a friend of mine who felt she needed to cut her self. she loved it and she isn't cutting anymore so i posted it...a storry of her struggle...
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