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    The Way You Are!

    Every time you look at me you see
    a part of yourself and you walk on
    by like i don't exist and that why i
    think your so miserable with yourself.

    Its like everything you know and everything
    you feel is so cold and that takes away from life,
    how do you live with all the pain that you have?
    knowing you will never be as happy as you could
    if you just stopped comparing others to yourself.

    I have tried to be nice and even tried to break the
    ice and all you do is look at me like i shouldn't even care,
    i have tried to be your friend and still you seem so cold,
    why do you have to be so harsh? nothing you feel is real
    its all in how you deal with things and you don't even try.

    So as i you walk away and never look back again i say
    why do you have to be so cold? why cant you just open
    up and let it all go so you can feel the warmth from a friend
    who is trying to be there for you?

    *this one is about how some people see themselves in others
    and avoid trying to do anything about it because they think there
    life is so worthless at some point and refuse to let anyone help.
    this poem can be took in alot of ways so this explanation is just one.
    comments and suggestions are welcome.*
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; May 07, 2007 at 11:21 AM. Reason: i miss spelled a word in the tittle
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Way Your Are!

    I loved it kinda reminded me of me a little lol but ok ttyl
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    Re: The Way Your Are!

    Wow!! Another awesome poem big bro!!! I soooo loved it!! And I can even relate 2 it a bit as well. Awesome job as always big bro!!
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    Awesome poem and so very true. It's so hard to believe some people can be so cruel. Keep up the great work you're doing sweetie and I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Re: The Way Your Are!

    i showed this poem to some of my friends and they rele liked it. i liked it cuz ive been in a situation with my girfriend (ex) and some friends that have gone throught tough times, and i offerend them help, but they ignored it. it was rele good H.O.T.D.C

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    I love the poem it's even better than my other poems! -Shocked-

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    Re: The Way You Are!

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    Every time you look at me you see
    a part of yourself and you walk on
    by like i don't exist and that why i
    think your so miserable with yourself.

    Its like everything you know and everything
    you feel is so cold and that takes away from life,
    how do you live with all the pain that you have?
    knowing you will never be as happy as you could
    if you just stopped comparing others to yourself.

    I have tried to be nice and even tried to break the
    ice and all you do is look at me like i shouldn't even care,
    i have tried to be your friend and still you seem so cold,
    why do you have to be so harsh? nothing you feel is real
    its all in how you deal with things and you don't even try.

    So as i you walk away and never look back again i say
    why do you have to be so cold? why cant you just open
    up and let it all go so you can feel the warmth from a friend
    who is trying to be there for you?

    *this one is about how some people see themselves in others
    and avoid trying to do anything about it because they think there
    life is so worthless at some point and refuse to let anyone help.
    this poem can be took in alot of ways so this explanation is just one.
    comments and suggestions are welcome.*
    Yay for chefy poo!!!!!!!! It sounds like you could make it a song. Has a good rythm. It is very true, everyone knows a someone, like this one. So you have achieved holding readers interest by relating! Good on ya mate! Miss you!

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    Re: The Way Your Are!

    yes very interesting. I used to wonder if there was someone who saw himself in me.
    Now Im pretty sure, people walk past me quickly, because they dont WANT to see themselves here. Not in me... no way... Im undesireable.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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