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Reply With QuoteO_O wow my friend.....i don't know why but it makes me want to cry in a way i can't really explain kind of like happy and sad.....like u said in the poem.....but it good and keep it up.
in our life
we live
without knowing
the true meaning of life
we laugh
we cry
life is two kinds
sad and happy
and somtimes
it's not for us to decide
what life we want
sad or happy
we continue to live
to move on
but most of us live
sad lives
lives that will never forget
what happened in the past
we live
just wondering how it feels
to fly up high
in the sky
with a smile
not a tear
but
we live with our eyes open
we know how to feel
and we realize things
not known to the world
we are one of a kind
we are the people
who know how to live
and how to see
but mostly feel free
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dedicated to everyone and to the site
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
O_O wow my friend.....i don't know why but it makes me want to cry in a way i can't really explain kind of like happy and sad.....like u said in the poem.....but it good and keep it up.
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I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.
Very good. ^^ Quite true too *nods*
awesome kool poem man, i really like the emotions that you put in your poem.
The last stanza was the best. I guess I'm not gonna see any punctuation and capitlization from you. In fact, some poems never need them. But I felt as if nothing was emphasized in the poem. It held emotion, but not enough. I felt that if you singled out some words by either capitilizing or breaking, it would have been much better. Nevertheless, you do have a talent for writing.
Seduced by Flesh
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