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  1. Jan 28, 2007 03:46 AM #1
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    we both know

    We both know. Know how much we loved each other.

    But it doesn’t show anymore. Should we just brake up?

    We haven’t been spending much time together.

    The fire. It’s gone.

    It was 3 years ago. We met in a bar.

    You bought me a drink. It all just started from there.

    We thought we would be together forever. Not ending like this.

    I wonder were did the love go.

    You’re working overtime now.

    The dinner waiting. But your not there.

    So should we just brake up?

    Because there’s nothing keeping us together now
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    lovely,simple lovely ^_^ great job lovely can't wait to read more
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    Re: we both know

    Wonderful poem equinn! The only suggestion I would make is changing brake to break! Other than that wonderful job and I'm looking forward to reading more of you poems!
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    ^__^ thank you guys soo much ^__^ it was a really quick one as mr.k knows lolbut thank you and i know im the little spelling error of ao haha ^__^
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