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    super effective Last Man Standing Champion FLawEdmiNd may be famous one day FLawEdmiNd may be famous one day FLawEdmiNd's Avatar
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    We Don't Need the City

    I'd like to one day run from the city,
    finding a beautiful meadow of tall grass
    and only with you.

    Gathering comfort from the trees
    which give me the means to breath
    not unlike yourself.

    I would build you a house of wood
    and furnish it with my heart;
    no gust could wither its bindings.

    We could have a lilac shrub
    except they would bloom all year,
    as an example of what we share.

    We should pick the dandelions often,
    and hope that more would grow.
    If we ever ran away from the city.

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    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: We Don't Need the City

    lol well i like the whole gist of your poem although i cant really write love poems myself ^^

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    Re: We Don't Need the City

    Hey, this wasn't bad, I'd like to see more from you. ^^

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