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    we me..............................

    we met in a quite place near the beach
    you asked me for a hade to help you with what you were carrying
    and things just fell in place after that
    rember your little quote
    the father we got to the light the bigger our shadow becomes
    so that was our quote for a long time
    so what we do know is up to us no one else
    but when it was up to us to disided what happens next
    we took a wrong trunk
    and were now with new people who love us more than we loved each

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    Re: we me..............................

    For heaven's sakes never put that mnay dots in a title. Spelling is the major problem here. Capitalization and punctuation would come second.
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    awww ok
    so i really need to try on that TT__TT
    some of u already know about me (right piggy)

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    Re: we me..............................

    XD i find just three dots does the trick just fine.
    and captialization before each sentence isnt always needed, i think it gives off a feeling.(imo)
    a pretty kind of get back at someone poem, or just an inevitable break up the two would know
    good job, lol but spelling still counts so get cracking :P

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    I think that your title is orginal and other that a few spelling mistakes it's your style, but I'm not that good at writing myself and I'm learning from Kasai and the poem and fanfic clan! But nice job either way "what I say is just an opinion not a law!"

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    Re: we me..............................

    thank you soooOOOooo much ^_^
    but plz dont put me down about the spelling im trying really hard to get it right
    im even doin spelling chaeks (me sooOOoo cant spell)
    but some of u know how hard it is for me

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