Thread: We Need to Live

AHH!! I LOVE IT LOLS><
i feel like singing it heh..
it makes me feel so happy
ahh!! i still love it!

Interestin' way of makin' ur art imitate life, man. Incredible poem, hope u continue on.

Originally Posted by Joe Mage

Interestin' way of makin' ur art imitate life, man. Incredible poem, hope u continue on.

Hey, thanks Joe! I appreciate it. ^_^

I do my best to use my art to have some kind of relevance to everyday life. I personally believe that life imitates art, not the other way around. So, this poem can be considered an example of that idea, I guess. At any rate, I'm glad you took time to read it.

Nice work Sprout ^^ Really nice...

The structure of the poem is good, the rythm is nice, the thought is just great and the repetition gives a nice effect

I especially like these lines:
"We need to live.
I can't stress this point enough."
These lines really just made me pay more attention again. It was like waking me up in the middle of the poem and making me understand that it's all about real life and not just a random poem

Really nice work Sprout ^^ And I always look forward to reading your poems ^^

I love this. It's taken me a long time to get to read it. But I'm glad you wrote it.
"We need to live,
not just simply exist."
This is EXACTLY the thought I was having when I left the comment. It feels like your speaking MY mind with the whole poem actually. Because you make MY point first off and then continue to elaborate it. Congrats.

Originally Posted by Lasura

Nice work Sprout ^^ Really nice...

The structure of the poem is good, the rythm is nice, the thought is just great and the repetition gives a nice effect

I especially like these lines:
"We need to live.
I can't stress this point enough."
These lines really just made me pay more attention again. It was like waking me up in the middle of the poem and making me understand that it's all about real life and not just a random poem

Really nice work Sprout ^^ And I always look forward to reading your poems ^^

Thanks, Lasura! ^_^ It's always a pleasure to see that you like my work! I'm glad I was able to wake you up in the middle of my poem.

Originally Posted by bratling

I love this. It's taken me a long time to get to read it. But I'm glad you wrote it.
"We need to live,
not just simply exist."
This is EXACTLY the thought I was having when I left the comment. It feels like your speaking MY mind with the whole poem actually. Because you make MY point first off and then continue to elaborate it. Congrats.

Yeah, that's kinda what I was shootin' for. You and I tend to think pretty much alike and I even find myself having the same thoughts as you at the exact same moment from time to time. (Ah... The joys of having a kick-ass "ex wife" LOL.)

So, when I was writing this, it wasn't really my thoughts being put down, but OURS. ^_^

I love it when ya' call me the ex wifey! LOL... that sounds wrong. But yeah I get what your saying. IT's really nice to have someone else have the same idea as you if not the same thoughts. The structure of this poem along with the message you put through really suprised me. I really enjoyed it. <3