Weeeeeeeeee!!!

It's like a rollercoaster,
going up and down
and all around.

It's like a road trip,
Sitting and waiting,
annoyed out of my mind.

But I won't complain,
I'm just here for fun,
just here for the ride.

WEEEEEEEEEE!!!

It's like the bounce around,
jumping high up
the coming back down.

It's like a bus ride,
sitting and sleeping
bored out of my mind.

But I won't complain,
I'm just here for my amusement,
just here for the ride.

WEEEEEEEEEE!!!

It's like a cruise,
motion up and down.

Do you not realize...
It get motion sick?

Haha, that is great for a childerens poem, :P hope to read more.

nice, i liked it alot, keep it up i want to see more!

Very whimsical. Its kind of a dizzy poem. Almost felt like a roller coaster ride! :laugh:

It was good unti lthe end. The cruise bit seemed random.