Haha, that is great for a childerens poem, :P hope to read more.
It's like a rollercoaster,
going up and down
and all around.
It's like a road trip,
Sitting and waiting,
annoyed out of my mind.
But I won't complain,
I'm just here for fun,
just here for the ride.
WEEEEEEEEEE!!!
It's like the bounce around,
jumping high up
the coming back down.
It's like a bus ride,
sitting and sleeping
bored out of my mind.
But I won't complain,
I'm just here for my amusement,
just here for the ride.
WEEEEEEEEEE!!!
It's like a cruise,
motion up and down.
Do you not realize...
It get motion sick?
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
Haha, that is great for a childerens poem, :P hope to read more.
nice, i liked it alot, keep it up i want to see more!
I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
Very whimsical. Its kind of a dizzy poem. Almost felt like a roller coaster ride!![]()
... Not Ever Again...
It was good unti lthe end. The cruise bit seemed random.
Seduced by Flesh
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