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    Weeeeeeeeee!!!

    It's like a rollercoaster,
    going up and down
    and all around.

    It's like a road trip,
    Sitting and waiting,
    annoyed out of my mind.

    But I won't complain,
    I'm just here for fun,
    just here for the ride.

    WEEEEEEEEEE!!!

    It's like the bounce around,
    jumping high up
    the coming back down.

    It's like a bus ride,
    sitting and sleeping
    bored out of my mind.

    But I won't complain,
    I'm just here for my amusement,
    just here for the ride.

    WEEEEEEEEEE!!!

    It's like a cruise,
    motion up and down.

    Do you not realize...
    It get motion sick?

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Weeeeeeeeee!!!

    Haha, that is great for a childerens poem, :P hope to read more.

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    Re: Weeeeeeeeee!!!

    nice, i liked it alot, keep it up i want to see more!
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    Re: Weeeeeeeeee!!!

    Very whimsical. Its kind of a dizzy poem. Almost felt like a roller coaster ride!
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    Re: Weeeeeeeeee!!!

    It was good unti lthe end. The cruise bit seemed random.
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