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  1. May 30, 2007 01:00 PM #1
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    Well, can you?

    I make these decisions that I can't explain.
    When I make them I go in like a storm.
    Not knowing where I'm going.
    Just knowing that it -feels- right.
    But there always comes a time that I open my eyes.
    I realize the mess I've made.
    THe tornado I've spun
    The damage I've done.
    The people I've lost.
    The people I've hurt.
    I look over the wasteland of of broken things and people.
    This is my creation.
    This is my Kingdom.
    This is where I rule.
    The angel demon thunderstorm.
    The nothingness of the sky.
    The everything in the galaxy.
    The emptiness of my being.
    Lost little ghost.
    THis is your home.
    Can you love me anyways?

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  2. May 30, 2007 03:27 PM #2
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    Re: Well, can you?

    Oh wow!! This such an unique poem reading this. All you want is this persons love which seems so romantic!!!! Well to me anyway hope to see more!
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  3. May 30, 2007 04:13 PM #3
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    Re: Well, can you?

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    Oh wow!! This such an unique poem reading this. All you want is this persons love which seems so romantic!!!! Well to me anyway hope to see more!
    Aw. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

    I'm going to have to write more often. It's great therepy and great venting and you guys seem to like it thus far as much as the Sprout does. So I think I'll have to do it more often.
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    Re: Well, can you?

    Hey bratling you did a wonderfull job on this I really like it alot. You know you have a therapy like I do although mine is drawing manga. anywas I really like this poem I am looking forward to reading some more from you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Aw. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

    I'm going to have to write more often. It's great therepy and great venting and you guys seem to like it thus far as much as the Sprout does. So I think I'll have to do it more often.
    Yeah, you're gonna have to. ^_^ I like your poetry. It kinda gets ya right here! *pounds ribcage* LOL. I especially like this one. Maybe it's because I can see where your emotions are coming from. You are my best friend after all. ^_^

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  6. May 31, 2007 10:43 AM #6
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    Re: Well, can you?

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Yeah, you're gonna have to. ^_^ I like your poetry. It kinda gets ya right here! *pounds ribcage* LOL. I especially like this one. Maybe it's because I can see where your emotions are coming from. You are my best friend after all. ^_^
    That's probably cus I was thinking about youand amber and the crazy shit floating around lately when I was writing this.
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