Well, can you?

bratling · May 30, 2007, 01:00 PM

I make these decisions that I can't explain.
When I make them I go in like a storm.
Not knowing where I'm going.
Just knowing that it -feels- right.
But there always comes a time that I open my eyes.
I realize the mess I've made.
THe tornado I've spun
The damage I've done.
The people I've lost.
The people I've hurt.
I look over the wasteland of of broken things and people.
This is my creation.
This is my Kingdom.
This is where I rule.
The angel demon thunderstorm.
The nothingness of the sky.
The everything in the galaxy.
The emptiness of my being.
Lost little ghost.
THis is your home.
Can you love me anyways?

written May 15th.

KuwiRules145 · May 30, 2007, 03:27 PM

Oh wow!! This such an unique poem reading this. All you want is this persons love which seems so romantic!!!! Well to me anyway hope to see more!

bratling · May 30, 2007, 04:13 PM

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Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

Oh wow!! This such an unique poem reading this. All you want is this persons love which seems so romantic!!!! Well to me anyway hope to see more!

Aw. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

I'm going to have to write more often. It's great therepy and great venting and you guys seem to like it thus far as much as the Sprout does. So I think I'll have to do it more often.

Ichigo_06 · May 30, 2007, 04:28 PM

Hey bratling you did a wonderfull job on this I really like it alot. You know you have a therapy like I do although mine is drawing manga. anywas I really like this poem I am looking forward to reading some more from you.

*atomik_sprout* · May 31, 2007, 09:22 AM

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Originally Posted by bratling

Aw. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

I'm going to have to write more often. It's great therepy and great venting and you guys seem to like it thus far as much as the Sprout does. So I think I'll have to do it more often.

Yeah, you're gonna have to. ^_^ I like your poetry. It kinda gets ya right here! *pounds ribcage* LOL. I especially like this one. Maybe it's because I can see where your emotions are coming from. You are my best friend after all. ^_^

bratling · May 31, 2007, 10:43 AM

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Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Yeah, you're gonna have to. ^_^ I like your poetry. It kinda gets ya right here! *pounds ribcage* LOL. I especially like this one. Maybe it's because I can see where your emotions are coming from. You are my best friend after all. ^_^

That's probably cus I was thinking about youand amber and the crazy shit floating around lately when I was writing this.

May 30, 2007, 01:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 11,925	Well, can you? I make these decisions that I can't explain. When I make them I go in like a storm. Not knowing where I'm going. Just knowing that it -feels- right. But there always comes a time that I open my eyes. I realize the mess I've made. THe tornado I've spun The damage I've done. The people I've lost. The people I've hurt. I look over the wasteland of of broken things and people. This is my creation. This is my Kingdom. This is where I rule. The angel demon thunderstorm. The nothingness of the sky. The everything in the galaxy. The emptiness of my being. Lost little ghost. THis is your home. Can you love me anyways? written May 15th.
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May 30, 2007, 03:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Well, can you? Oh wow!! This such an unique poem reading this. All you want is this persons love which seems so romantic!!!! Well to me anyway hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,734	Re: Well, can you? Hey bratling you did a wonderfull job on this I really like it alot. You know you have a therapy like I do although mine is drawing manga. anywas I really like this poem I am looking forward to reading some more from you. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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