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~Crying~
Helpless
Hopeless
Useless
So easy,
To do,
To make,
To force,
To hate.
Never relenting
Always attacking
Never waining
Even the strongest can do it
Even the weakest can avoid it
Only one thing can prevent it
That one thing
Ever embracing
Ever cold
Death...
Awesome poem. I am in love with your style of writing. And thr way you opened with the triple two syllable lines of aliteration.
You know, I've never had anyone tell me they were in love with the way I write my free style poems. And Im supprised you say what I was getting at in the start.
Thank you ^.^
wtf? this is so weak...i expected to much more from you ..."/
i'm not good in writing poems... but yours is sooo nice i like it, keep on writing more ^^