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    What Crying is

    ~Crying~
    Helpless
    Hopeless
    Useless

    So easy,
    To do,
    To make,
    To force,
    To hate.

    Never relenting
    Always attacking
    Never waining

    Even the strongest can do it
    Even the weakest can avoid it
    Only one thing can prevent it

    That one thing
    Ever embracing
    Ever cold

    Death...

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    Re: What Crying is

    Awesome poem. I am in love with your style of writing. And thr way you opened with the triple two syllable lines of aliteration.

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    Re: What Crying is

    You know, I've never had anyone tell me they were in love with the way I write my free style poems. And Im supprised you say what I was getting at in the start.

    Thank you ^.^

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    Re: What Crying is

    wtf? this is so weak...i expected to much more from you ..."/
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    Re: What Crying is

    i'm not good in writing poems... but yours is sooo nice i like it, keep on writing more ^^

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